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• 呂同學(xué)
  寫一篇我的大學(xué)生活英語作文 120詞
  • 劉老師
    like the vast majority are too high to accept the most solemn baptism of three young with too much of the most chaotic of the three young college students feel like a big eye-catching red chuaizhuo university admissions i notice in the eyes of their parents look forward to the feelings of pleasure way into the shanghai fisheries university. after a series of complicated enrollment procedures and parents tizhe da packages of baggage busy went to the designated bedroom. one into the room as expected and expected the same four human small bedroom had been packed in together and every newborns family sent out almost all even though the weather was hot and abnormal arrangement of housekeeping is tired big sweat dripping
    can we have everyones faces filled with happy smile. end finally clean up the room saying good-bye of the worth of the parents asked warned him and we will be living together four four-year roommate finally able to communicate well about each others affection. a different character different experiences but holding the same yearning for a better college life so we immediately started arising out of strange and shy as can talk about anything as if an old friend not seen in a long time the same way we lying on their bed space and different places to chat up seem to have lots to talk about words. it is because of this in such a sultry summer night we sleep a
    spent a period in pre-school excitement carefree happy life of indulgence we are going to face is the real university life. freshman year of study not related to professional courses but lay a solid foundation of knowledge with emphasis on english language learning to develop good habits to master the english language proficiency dialogue and writing capabilities. in fact as long as the serious lectures and complete the exercise the examination can cope easily easily resolved. freshman curriculum also very different from primary and secondary schools curriculum less is more some subjects only last week relative to a day left to get a lot of his spare time and sometimes only one lesson a day only . 就像絕大多數(shù)接受過高三青春最莊嚴(yán)的洗禮，擁有過高三青春最紛亂的心情的大學(xué)新生一樣，揣著醒目的大紅色大學(xué)錄取通知書的我，在父母期盼的目光下，心情愉悅地走進(jìn)了上海水產(chǎn)大學(xué)。在辦完一連串繁瑣的入學(xué)手續(xù)后，和父母提著大包小包的行李忙忙碌碌地趕往指定的寢室。一踏入房間，果然和預(yù)料的一樣，小小的四人間寢室已被擠得滿滿的了，每個(gè)新生的家人幾乎全體出動，盡管當(dāng)時(shí)的天氣炎熱異常，布置整理房間已是累得大汗淋漓，可大家每個(gè)人的臉上都洋溢著幸福的笑容。好不容易收拾完房間，送走了萬般囑咐叮嚀的父母，我們這四個(gè)將要共同居住四年的室友終于可以好好地交流一下彼此的感情了。不同的性格，不同的經(jīng)歷，但抱著同樣對大學(xué)生活的美好向往，使我們立刻擺脫剛開始產(chǎn)生的陌生和害羞，成為無話不談，好似許久未見的老朋友一樣，就這樣，我們躺在各自的床上海闊天空，天南地北地聊起來，似乎有說不完的話。也就是因?yàn)槿绱?，在這樣一個(gè)悶熱的夏夜，我們失眠了
    在度過了一段開學(xué)前心情激動，無憂無慮，開心放縱的生活后，我們即將面臨的就是真正的大學(xué)生活。大一的學(xué)習(xí)還未涉及專業(yè)課程，只是打好基礎(chǔ)知識，重點(diǎn)在于培養(yǎng)良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，掌握熟練的英語對話，寫作等能力。其實(shí)只要認(rèn)真聽課及完成習(xí)題，考試都能應(yīng)付自如，輕松解決。大一的課程安排也與中小學(xué)的截然不同，課程少而精，有的學(xué)科一星期才上一次，相對地，每天留給自己的課余時(shí)間變得很多了，有時(shí)一天只有一節(jié)課而已。
• C同學(xué)
  英語考研作文話題模板
  • 李老師
    (1)as is vividly depicted in the picture(描述圖畫).(2) the most striking feature is(圖畫重點(diǎn)信息).(3)there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
    第二自然段重點(diǎn)論述主題，第一句可以用一個(gè)有爆發(fā)力的主題句闡釋主題的重要性。第二句談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的永恒的社會意義可以用一個(gè)排比句說明只要有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象就可以讓我們不斷征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具體的例子談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明這個(gè)積極的現(xiàn)象對人有利。第四句可以從反面談如果沒有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象人們生活就憂悶有挫折感無前進(jìn)動力前途渺茫。第五句作總結(jié)，談只有這個(gè)現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者。
    (1)as is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息) profoundly indicates that 主題 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)undoubtedly it is 主題 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) according to a survey made by china daily 與主題相關(guān)的好的后果.(4)if 不這樣的話 we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)only by 主題 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
    第三段為結(jié)束段落，總結(jié)全文內(nèi)容并提出建議。首句可以說無論做大事還是小事無論做難事還是容易事都要這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象。第二個(gè)句子談建議讓它變的更好。第三個(gè)句子談讓它變的更好的方法通常發(fā)揮它的好處避免壞處。第四句談只要有這個(gè)積極現(xiàn)象就會享受一個(gè)美好豐富和有活力的未來。
    (1)from the above analysis it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small 主題is indispensable on the way to success. (2)it is therefore necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主題more efficient. (3)on one hand we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主題. on the other hand 不這樣的現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該批評. (4)only with主題 can we embrace a glorious future.
• 純同學(xué)
  寫海南島的英語作文
  • S老師
    hainan island is situated in the south of china well-known for its “the end of the sky and the rim of the sea (tianyahaijiao)”. hainan island is the famous scenic spot in china for its golden beaches blue sea and the tropical climate(熱帶氣候). the province is divided into hainan nansha xisha zhongsha islands etc.
    　　haikou is the capital city. the second biggest city sanya hosted the 2003 miss world competition and earned the fame as “hawaii of china”. sanya had been a poor little fishing village until 1954 when the government made it the hainan special economic zone. now there are many fine hotels and golf courses（高爾夫球場）. many new hotels are being built to receive more and more guests from all around the world. tourism now accounts for(占到) 80% of the island’s revenue（收入）.