能否批改一下這兩篇考研英語二的大小作文？

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• 呂同學(xué)
  寫一篇我的大學(xué)生活英語作文 120詞
  • 劉老師
    like the vast majority are too high to accept the most solemn baptism of three young with too much of the most chaotic of the three young college students feel like a big eye-catching red chuaizhuo university admissions i notice in the eyes of their parents look forward to the feelings of pleasure way into the shanghai fisheries university. after a series of complicated enrollment procedures and parents tizhe da packages of baggage busy went to the designated bedroom. one into the room as expected and expected the same four human small bedroom had been packed in together and every newborns family sent out almost all even though the weather was hot and abnormal arrangement of housekeeping is tired big sweat dripping
    can we have everyones faces filled with happy smile. end finally clean up the room saying good-bye of the worth of the parents asked warned him and we will be living together four four-year roommate finally able to communicate well about each others affection. a different character different experiences but holding the same yearning for a better college life so we immediately started arising out of strange and shy as can talk about anything as if an old friend not seen in a long time the same way we lying on their bed space and different places to chat up seem to have lots to talk about words. it is because of this in such a sultry summer night we sleep a
    spent a period in pre-school excitement carefree happy life of indulgence we are going to face is the real university life. freshman year of study not related to professional courses but lay a solid foundation of knowledge with emphasis on english language learning to develop good habits to master the english language proficiency dialogue and writing capabilities. in fact as long as the serious lectures and complete the exercise the examination can cope easily easily resolved. freshman curriculum also very different from primary and secondary schools curriculum less is more some subjects only last week relative to a day left to get a lot of his spare time and sometimes only one lesson a day only . 就像絕大多數(shù)接受過高三青春最莊嚴(yán)的洗禮，擁有過高三青春最紛亂的心情的大學(xué)新生一樣，揣著醒目的大紅色大學(xué)錄取通知書的我，在父母期盼的目光下，心情愉悅地走進(jìn)了上海水產(chǎn)大學(xué)。在辦完一連串繁瑣的入學(xué)手續(xù)后，和父母提著大包小包的行李忙忙碌碌地趕往指定的寢室。一踏入房間，果然和預(yù)料的一樣，小小的四人間寢室已被擠得滿滿的了，每個(gè)新生的家人幾乎全體出動，盡管當(dāng)時(shí)的天氣炎熱異常，布置整理房間已是累得大汗淋漓，可大家每個(gè)人的臉上都洋溢著幸福的笑容。好不容易收拾完房間，送走了萬般囑咐叮嚀的父母，我們這四個(gè)將要共同居住四年的室友終于可以好好地交流一下彼此的感情了。不同的性格，不同的經(jīng)歷，但抱著同樣對大學(xué)生活的美好向往，使我們立刻擺脫剛開始產(chǎn)生的陌生和害羞，成為無話不談，好似許久未見的老朋友一樣，就這樣，我們躺在各自的床上海闊天空，天南地北地聊起來，似乎有說不完的話。也就是因?yàn)槿绱?，在這樣一個(gè)悶熱的夏夜，我們失眠了
    在度過了一段開學(xué)前心情激動，無憂無慮，開心放縱的生活后，我們即將面臨的就是真正的大學(xué)生活。大一的學(xué)習(xí)還未涉及專業(yè)課程，只是打好基礎(chǔ)知識，重點(diǎn)在于培養(yǎng)良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，掌握熟練的英語對話，寫作等能力。其實(shí)只要認(rèn)真聽課及完成習(xí)題，考試都能應(yīng)付自如，輕松解決。大一的課程安排也與中小學(xué)的截然不同，課程少而精，有的學(xué)科一星期才上一次，相對地，每天留給自己的課余時(shí)間變得很多了，有時(shí)一天只有一節(jié)課而已。
• 趙同學(xué)
  考研英語二的書推薦一下，我英語0基礎(chǔ)
  • 湯老師
    英語基礎(chǔ)薄弱的考研黨用英語二的《考研圣經(jīng)》就可以，它的解析是逐詞逐句講解的，不僅可以做真題，還可以補(bǔ)基礎(chǔ)，不用擔(dān)心有看不懂的地方還要查工具書。
    零基礎(chǔ)就要從詞匯上突破，先把考研的核心單詞搞定，看到單詞知道什么意思了再去提升閱讀的能力，最后攻克解題技巧。給你介紹一本背單詞很好用的一本書《非常詞匯》，你只需要在660個(gè)句子中就把考研的核心單詞背完了，然后再用英語二真題書《考研圣經(jīng)》來提升閱讀能力，這個(gè)書的講解是一句一句的分析的，不怕英語基礎(chǔ)不好而看不懂文章，還有解題技巧的總結(jié)。就這樣一步步的深入，一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的攻克，不要心急，心急吃不了熱豆腐的。
    我當(dāng)時(shí)選真題的時(shí)候沒有費(fèi)勁，因?yàn)樽约河⒄Z渣到我身邊的考研小伙伴都看不下去了，他們直接就給我說，我基礎(chǔ)差直接就用英語二的《考研圣經(jīng)》！用“圣經(jīng)”和拯救我這個(gè)“英語渣”是絕配！
    我當(dāng)時(shí)欲哭無淚，其實(shí)也看到挺多同學(xué)用這本書了，但是被他們這么一說，我心里挺難過的，直接就買了這本書開始惡補(bǔ)了。
    我詞匯書也沒有買，詞匯和語法都是在這本真題書里積累的。因?yàn)檫@本書真的解析真的超詳細(xì)，不但對重點(diǎn)詞匯有解析，還對每一個(gè)句子都進(jìn)行了詳細(xì)的解析，用了它，我都沒用過工具書了(#^.^#)，找了一張圖，你可以感受一下：
    因?yàn)樵谧铋_始做真題的時(shí)候我就在這本書中積累詞匯和語法了，對那些不會的不懂的、還有就是熟悉的但是不知道意思的、不會用的，都積累了，每天早上起來就背這些內(nèi)容，晚上睡覺前再鞏固一遍加深記憶。
    到后面做真題的時(shí)候，真的是感覺到輕松的，不會的不認(rèn)識的都在一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)減少，我都懷疑自己是不是超神了，做題的時(shí)候很好上手，不會說頭大、沒有頭緒之類的，反而能很好把握文章的大意，做題也能抓住重點(diǎn)了。也可以和苦惱“say bye bye”啦
    因?yàn)榇鸢附馕稣娴暮芗?xì)，再給你放張圖看看答案解析：
    真的強(qiáng)推你用這本書?。?！沒毛病，哈哈哈(^▽^)
    還想給你分享一下我每天的復(fù)習(xí)日程，希望能對你有用，僅供參考吧~
    補(bǔ)充：我建議你結(jié)合網(wǎng)課學(xué)習(xí)，這樣對做題能有鞏固和提高~
    最近我一個(gè)學(xué)妹在用張國靜老師的網(wǎng)課，我也看了一下，感覺挺不錯(cuò)的，講的都是考點(diǎn)，重點(diǎn)劃分明確，復(fù)習(xí)起來也有針對性，很適合備考時(shí)間不足的考研黨，還可以用來鞏固基礎(chǔ)，我看了一下價(jià)格還不到一百塊，真的是不要太實(shí)惠，我當(dāng)時(shí)真心沒少花錢~
    祝你考研成功~！
• 海同學(xué)
  求一篇關(guān)于大學(xué)生消費(fèi)觀的英語作文
  • 張老師
    i think it is necessary for a university student to have a correct idea of consumption.
    first，consumption according to our own needs but also to suit our needs.
    secondconsumption should be independent not to repeat word for word what others say do not follow the crowd what head.
    third，consumption should be coordinated not only heavy material consumption and ignore the spiritual consumption.
    fourthconsumer spending should be with their income to adapt and moderate consumption.
    at last we need to avoid the blindness and rational consumption.
    if we do that we will have a correct view of consumption.