能否批改一下我寫的考研英語2011年關于汽車品牌市場份額變化的大作文?

老師您好,辛苦您幫忙看一下我這篇11年關于汽車品牌市場份額變化的大作文,再打個大體的分數。 有幾個問題先問下老師: 1、分析原因第一條里我用的“越來越窄的科技差距”這么表述是否正確,因為讀起來好像不太順但沒想到如何修改。2、本國汽車制造商可否用“domestic ”?3、分析原因中,中國占兩條,美日放在一條里,這樣的布局是否可以。 還有其它問題辛苦老師再幫忙具體指點一下,謝謝啦!

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2021-11-07 15:16:00
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  • 老師 高頓財經研究院老師
    高頓為您提供一對一解答服務,關于能否批改一下我寫的考研英語2011年關于汽車品牌市場份額變化的大作文?我的回答如下:

    同學,你好!

     

    分數:11

     

    回答:

    本國汽車制造商可用“domestic ”

    分析原因中,中國占兩條,美日放在一條里,這樣的布局可以

     

     

    語法錯誤:

    可以說“The gap in scientific and technological development has narrowed.”科技發(fā)展差距縮小     使用句子不要使用你的短語。你的那句Considering可以改為 As the gap in scientific and technological development has narrowed,

     

    美國品牌持平,建議你寫出具體數字,例如 The share of American brand bottomed out at 15%

    第一段改為gain popularity  刪除in

    使用at play時,最好跟factor搭配,比如There are a number of factors at play.許多因素在發(fā)揮作用

    service改為serve

    low改為lower


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  • 劉同學
    跪求一篇關于市場營銷的英語作文
    • 劉老師
      您好,看到您的問題將要被新提的問題從問題列表中擠出,問題無人回答過期后會被扣分并且懸賞分也將被沒收!所以我給你提幾條建議:
      一,您可以選擇在正確的分類下去提問或者到與您問題相關專業(yè)網站論壇里去看看,這樣知道你問題答案的人才會多一些,回答的人也會多些。
      二,您可以多認識一些知識豐富的網友,和曾經為你解答過問題的網友經常保持聯系,遇到問題時可以直接向這些好友詢問,他們會更加真誠熱心為你尋找答案的。
      三,該自己做的事還是必須由自己來做的,有的事還是須由自己的聰明才智來解決的,別人不可能代勞!只有自己做了才是真正屬于自己的,別人只能給你提供指導和建議,最終靠自己。

      您可以不采納我的答案,但請你一定采納我的建議哦!

      雖然我的答案很可能不能解決你的問題,但一定可以使你更好地使用問問哦~~~
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    寫一篇關于會計的英語作文
    • F老師
      what is the accounting for many years the popular saying accounting is accounting scores and accounting.
      ancient china "accounting" arising out of the western zhou dynasty mainly referring to the activities of the income and expenditure records inspection and supervision. in the qing dynasty scholar jiao xun "mencius justice" a book on the "will" and "dollars" for the general explained "it is sporadic in terms of the total cost-effective it will" it is necessary to carry out the accounting for the individual accounts individual accounts should be integrated comprehensive accounting system.

      accounting concept
      accounting is the currency as a major units of measurement using a series of specialized method the economic activities of enterprises continuous systematic comprehensive and integrated accounting and oversight and based on this analysis of economic activity forecast and control to improve the economy the effectiveness of a management activities.

      from an accounting definition we can see that
      1. accounting first is an economic calculation. it wants to use the economic process measurement standards as the main currency continuous systematic comprehensive integrated computing. economic calculation refers to people's economic resources (human material and financial resources) the economic relations (equivalent exchange ownership distribution credit settlement etc.) and economic process (input output income cost efficiency etc.) conducted by the calculating the number of said. economic calculation includes both static phenomenon on the economy's stock of the situation including the situation of the period of dynamic flow including both pre-calculated plan but also after the actual calculation. accounting is a typical example of economic calculation calculation of economic calculation in addition to accounting which includes statistical computing and business computing.
      2. accounting is an economic information systems. it would a company dispersed into the business activities of a group of objective data providing the company's performance problems and enterprise funds labor ownership income costs profits debt debt and other information. provide relevant information to the relevant department advisory services anyone can provide information through accounting enterprises understand the basic situation and as the basis for its decision. clearly the accounting is to provide financial information-based economy information systems business is the licensing of a points thus accounting has been called "corporate language."
      3. accounting is an economic management. in the non-commodity economy accounting directly for property and materials management in commodity economy because of commodity production and exchange of commodities economic activity in the property and materials are a form of value performance accounting is used form of value the management of the property and materials. if accounting is an information system and mainly focused on corporate and external information users then that is an economic management accounting activities was mainly within the enterprises the. history and reality the accounting is social production develops to a certain stage of the product development and production is to meet the needs of the management especially with the development of the commodity economy and the emergence of competition in the market through demand management on the economy activities strict control and supervision. at the same time the content and form of accounting constantly improve and change from a purely accounting scores mainly for accounting operations external submit accounting statements as in prior operating forecasts decision-making on the matter of economic activities control and supervision in hindsight check. clearly accounting whether past present or future it is people's economic management activities.
  • L同學
    求一英語作文。。關于寫食品安全的。。高中詞匯.
    • 馬老師
      eating safely
      food safety is very important to us. how can we make food safe here’s some advice.
      first we shouldn’t go out to eat fast food often. at the restaurant there is also some food that isn’t safe such as unhealthy oil.
      second we should make food clean before cooking. remember to boil food.
      third we should buy and eat food carefully. if the food is in bags we should read instructions and dates carefully. make sure the food is safe.
      (大致意思:目前 食品安全問題引起了人們的廣泛關注 一些生產廠家為了降低成本追求利潤 缺乏足夠的安全措施 致使一些劣質或有害的食品流入市場 對人們的健康產生了極大的危害 請你就此事給一家英文報刊寫封信 談談個人看法并呼吁整個社會關注此事)
      注:具體有那句翻譯不過來,歡迎追問。
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